Writing Prompt Flash Fiction #4!

by | Sep 5, 2019

A Facebook writing group I’m in does prompts every now and again for flash fiction pieces. These works are generally 500 words or less and are mostly just a scene.

Prompt: How a creature could be so simultaneously horrifying and beautiful was beyond her understanding…

She was anything but graceful as she tripped down the ramp from the loading bay. Hurtling towards ground, a blur of purples, reds, and blues swirled around her as she fell with a hard grunt and a puff of olive shaded dust.

Melanie groaned as she squinted up at the harsh glare of the three suns. A whimper caught in the arid clench of her throat as the understanding that Atera, the planet they’d been heading to, had two suns, not three, filtered through her muddled thoughts. They were also the same golden yellow of the home planet abandoned generations ago, not this strange red light.

Scrubby brush in shades of blue and purple should have been verdant swaths of green, too. Struggling up to elbows and then palms, she surveyed the too foreign scene before her. The dirt in the holograms had been rich brown, perfect for the crops needed to sustain life. This place, whatever and wherever it was, was not where she should be.

The explosion of sound through the eerie landscape as the engine of the escape pod lost its final battle knocked Melanie to her back. Breath knocked from her lungs, the very air boiled with heat. Face aching as flames erupted into the pristine sky, she crawled in an awkward scramble on her back towards the safety of the twisted strands of bushes and trees.

Flipping over to hands and knees, she continued the bid for safety in a flailing rush. Limbs unresponsive, she fell more times than she could count. Lip split, eye blackened from a rock, she was thankful for the eye that remained and the tooth that was just chipped.

The fire grew higher, the shriek of metal loud in the clearing as it burned and twisted from the heat. Tearing gaze still fixed on the demolished hopes of escape from wherever she might be, she didn’t see the looming shadow.

Didn’t stop until she ran shoulder first into something that was slick and hard. A brick wall of strength that moved and kicked her back, sending her sprawling on the dusty earth.

The scream somehow overpowered the sounds of destruction behind her. Ungodly and shrill, it pierced her ears, her scream joining the thing’s as she clapped her hands to her ears.

Silence reigned when the thing stopped its noise. Melanie couldn’t hear the multiple smaller explosions though she felt the bursts of heat against her back as she sat up to stare.

She couldn’t call it a creature, no matter that her mind tried to place it as something known. It looked nothing like any insect she had ever encountered, yet her mind kept trying to call it that. Armored plates of slick chitin and limbs that hinged the wrong way, it was taller than she was, larger than anything she’d ever seen. Its head was on a thin stalk too far above what she tried to call shoulders, thin and triangular with huge orbs of inky black that did not so much pivot as see take in everything at once.

The chitinous armor was nothing short of glorious. Oil slick black with hues of vivid green and blue, magenta and even gold reflecting in the odd light. It shimmered with a beautiful iridescence with every movement of its chest as it breathed. It stepped forward with a terrifying grace, its bulk and disproportionate parts elegant in their agility.

She couldn’t understand how something so horrifying her mind couldn’t even put it together as a whole could be so damned beautiful. 
It stared back at her and began a low chittering hum that grinded through her bones. It made her teeth ache as the thing got louder and louder.
Darkness edged her vision despite her terror. Kicking at the drab dirt in panicked bursts, she went nowhere. The sounds grew louder still, her limbs refusing to answer her shrill screams to move, to run.
The thing stood over her, looming as it bent in ways that shouldn’t have been possible. Its hideous chittering began to fade, but it was too late. Blackness swelled behind her eyes, dragging her down as her heart pummeled the back of her ribs.
“Yes, you will be a delightful specimen.”

The preternatural calm was a lie, Devin realized. His body was poised, ready for the killing strike. It was his eyes though that showed his turmoil beyond the fixed stare. Clamping her lips into a hard line, she gave a minute shake of her head. Refusing to bare more of her soul to him.

“Despite sitting at that stupid desk, watching him destroy me a little more each day, you made it better,” she breathed, eyes widening as she willed her treacherous tongue to stop moving. “Just seeing you, even smelling you… There was hope, somewhere in all of it, and…”

“Enough.” His was a voice dragged over hot coals, wrenched from a place neither of them knew existed. A dark abyss that became more twisted, more voracious as Devin shone a glimpse of light upon it.

“You always made me feel safe.”

“And you hated my touch. Always yelling your accusations of stealing things from you, taking everything away,” he snarled against her lips. “You tried to kill both of us, to destroy all of this, and you expect me to believe I made you feel safe?”

“It scared me, Daniel.”

“And now you’re not, is that it?”

“Not of you.”

As if it had never faltered, the shimmering heat returned. It bloomed through her chest, tangling through her limbs as she struggled to work them free to return his crushing grasp. Whining low in her throat when he kept her imprisoned, she did the only thing she could. Arching her neck, she brought their lips flush. Her tongue teased at the tender flesh, begging for entry. Devin whimpered when he tore his mouth away.


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